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6 September, 2008 / Erik

Another Look at Project X

Project X will carry the same name as the site. Comming soon, Future Threat and the Hope of Progress. An alternate history. A murder mystery in a controlled city of dreams. A tale of the cost of the progress.



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  1. David Sandey / Sep 8 2008 11:36 am

    Oooo, tasty! I assume that the grammatical issue in panel one is deliberate?

    Any signs of a launch date?

  2. Tim / Sep 9 2008 9:33 am

    That so totally looks like you.

    Good work here, though the lettering could be rearranged to be easier on the eye. The justification makes it a bit hard to track.

    And the rule of……man I’m blanken on the name…..line perspective? Is being broken. You know, that rule in cinema where you have two characters conversing in opposite shots and you’re not supposed to cross either character’s line of slight so that you don’t confuse the audience.

    To clarify:
    In panel one, Dude In Black is left in the panel and you’re on the right. But then in panel two, you switch, so you’re not where I expect you to be and it takes a second for me to reorient who’s who in the panel. And then in panel three you switch back to normal.

    It’s probably not a big deal, but it’s noticable to me at least. They did it in an early episode of Scrubs we were watching recently; Chels didn’t catch it but I did.

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